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Topic: hallows Mon 11/03/08 07:04 PM
enjoyed it, one you can read over, and get new meaning, cool
 
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Topic: Wreckless n' Careless Mon 11/03/08 07:01 PM
awesome
yes way
 
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Topic: Flying Mon 11/03/08 03:29 PM
sweet from a sweet angel, inspiring
 
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Topic: The Dirge of McDoole and Mary Mon 11/03/08 03:26 PM
very good writing
welcome
 
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Topic: the watershed bridge Mon 11/03/08 01:39 PM
bridge of trolls
some of the young run
some of the young run with fear
some of the young run with fear and fun

in the village
there are six wise cracks
who surrounded the trolls
with more fear
than the children
but also with
more violence

i had hoped
the three wise men
would multiply
though they had the gift
to multiply the moment
they could not
multiply
themselves

oh the ode
to the trolls
attracted poets
their beards long
their eyes distant
the trolls became close
to the poets who shared
songs of wisdom
when the poets words
sounded in torment
the trolls laughter
healed
the poets
woe

when the rains
gathered
then all would
gather

at
the
bridge
 
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Topic: sea eyes Sun 11/02/08 04:31 PM
QUOTE:

good one


thank you
 
jimz
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Topic: sea eyes Sun 11/02/08 03:26 PM
sun sun sun
angeleyes
my fire
in my oven
flames rhyme
flames of song
mountains birth
lava
eyes
of light
fire fans
shore


 
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Topic: metal Sat 11/01/08 11:27 AM
QUOTE:

Plated
Graciously
Gifting Polished
Hope
Immortal
Calm



heart
 
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Topic: Hope Sat 11/01/08 11:22 AM
way cool
 
jimz
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Topic: Her Veil Sat 11/01/08 11:21 AM
always a pleasure to read your poetry
 
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Topic: Tatterred Moments Sat 11/01/08 11:20 AM
smokin smokin
 
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Topic: metal Sat 11/01/08 11:15 AM
metal armor
fed in
dragon
self plated
hard hope
box of
red tip
matches
cut card
board
edges
puffed up
upheavel
tunnelled
germ of
destiny
iron
hope
 
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Topic: liquid Sat 11/01/08 10:55 AM
running windows
dissolving mirrors
forest blend forest blend
gem water soul water
coyote goat horns
rebelled off

liquid sommersault
running liquid
through and
through
 
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Topic: Medium Wed 10/29/08 06:40 PM
you are an awesome writer!
 
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Topic: spectrum Wed 10/29/08 04:16 PM
dance dance
rhyme the channel
with i felt
and fifty two bubbles
pop
1969 starts

born in
strutting in
released as flying
minnow
rainbow
colors
rainbow
mind

jump up
twisting
convienient
light
the moon
bleeding

juggarnaught
knots
a triple beam
and the head
of goliath
shatters

oh oh oh
railroad
grandfather clock
magic palm trees
oh the purple veins
oh the river
oh the reverse pedal
down
again

now now
room and board
plastered heart
broken two by fours
nail split
by angels

over now
the tale end
of gossomer
no more
yet the violet
attiitude
wind chimes
the heart
 
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Topic: the sun sea rhyme Wed 10/29/08 04:02 PM
done up
signed eyes
on the threshing
floor
color of blood
river of reason
held up

pass the
brass
rambling cup
a castle
yet stones
broken
the rhyme
not an
end

seas
rawhide
raging
mist
kiss
held

being
rented out
a shore
broken

pay me
wind tones
soulful sadness
eyes blue
hidden

opera
wings
manifested
undone
journey
of paths
sunned
paths
sea
be
low

turn me
paradise
blue eyes
blue time

love
journ
eyed

 
jimz
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Topic: she Mon 10/27/08 03:12 PM
corner of blue
a breath of yellow
soul in my wind
around in me
the painted heart
a heart of light
blue parlor
lights
smile unburdened
palace of garden
hues

earth no weight
hidden
boxed up
ferried ocean
parted in
her

 
jimz
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Topic: the rounds Mon 10/27/08 03:05 PM
down down
i dont know
round and round
confetti souls
racetracks
cars and the
afternoon form
held below
the
belt
round
round
in the round
homies break off
and the party
at the park
starts
round
round the round
a pound of flesh
spears of flesh
alcohol soaked
and always
pulling apart
rounds in the
round

 
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Topic: the warm Sun 10/26/08 01:39 PM
whoa
tranquil swans
mountain horses
family of light
drawings of deer
does eyes
light
cave

snow wolves
womb bearing
an angel
a howl
and the dipping
of gold
moon moon

eagle
reflection
a distance
far

debris gather
cobwebs gather
tombs

the owl
returns
from the
hunt
cant gather
sun

leaves rip
off the bark
the butterfly
warm wolf soul
she warms
morning wings
comfort
 
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Topic: to harry Sat 10/25/08 10:43 AM
QUOTE:

drinker This is a gem, Jim...Cheers man.


thank youdrinker
 

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