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d4tc
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Sun 11/02/08 09:49 AM
Indifferent.
She decided she'd become a nun.

Sizzlesless,
in admist
of it's dizzyness.

She awakes. Awkward and alive.


At noon she breaks.
Takes in it's stride.

"Glide feet glide!"
she thinks lavishingly
as she
HeHeHe's
her index finger
at every man without potential,

their seeing
being potential. Experimental.
The fleshy chemicals. Boosting
vitality.

Some knows.
She tried. Forgetting?
Impossible. A topic full
of fear in a dissolusioned trust
plagued's her soul.

She could not find justice
naked,
she reframes it
In the sheets,
at the park.
In the beach,
in the dark.
Going
with
the
sin.
Gone
with the wind.
 
iam4u
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Sun 11/02/08 10:13 AM
drinker drinker Cheers DC! Good rhyme bro.
 
pkd1220
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Mon 11/03/08 07:04 AM
Brilliant- just love the last stanzadrinker bigsmile
 
Fadedspirit
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Tue 11/04/08 03:24 AM
Nice write d4tc. drinker
 
Noden
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Tue 11/04/08 04:06 AM
That's like me the end part anyways "Gone with the Wind", hence the name, "Noden"
Ojibway for windflowers
 
LAMom
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Tue 11/04/08 07:06 AM
Ditto on the Brilliant flowerforyou
 
d4tc
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Tue 11/04/08 07:14 AM
Thank You,

flowerforyou LAMom
flowerforyou Noden
drinker Faded
flowerforyou pkd
drinker iam4u
 
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