pkd1220
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| Mon 11/03/08 10:07 AM |
Fear, I wonder
Has stopped you, me
Keeping us from where
We should be
Instead we stand
Riveted to the spot
And with our arms folded
We miss out on a lot
How does one break
From all that came before
And forget the past, it's just that
No need to even up the score
All I know is when it's good
The feelings, the intensity tenfold
More than most could ever hope
The actions, the passion so bold
You think how could I live without
My heart would break, I would die
And it is in this cycle we remain
Wishing no more pain, we don't even try
And off we go to our comfort zones
Missing out on the love we need
And when the mind grows weak
We cry for all and hearts bleed.
*not about me-wrote for a friend*
so no sadness here 
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Edited by pkd1220 on Mon 11/03/08 10:09 AM
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1956deluxe
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| Mon 11/03/08 10:08 AM |
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LAMom
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| Mon 11/03/08 01:18 PM |
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pkd1220
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| Mon 11/03/08 05:33 PM |
thanks 1956 deluxe
Denise- you too
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1000111010123
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| Mon 11/03/08 05:40 PM |
Way to write pkd1220 
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Fadedspirit
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| Tue 11/04/08 03:35 AM |
Excellent write. Wisdom come by words spoken in care. 
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Noden
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| Tue 11/04/08 04:11 AM |
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mmmmmmmmmm, now that's a thought
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pkd1220
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1000111010123
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| Tue 11/04/08 08:21 AM |
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QUOTE:
Excellent write. Wisdom come by words spoken in care.
Amen my brother
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1000111010123
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| Tue 11/04/08 08:22 AM |
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QUOTE:
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Way to write pkd1220
thanks for commenting
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Wolfeyes58
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| Tue 11/04/08 08:31 AM |
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to always for yourself or for friends, you always have a heart Pam. Good write.
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pkd1220
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pkd1220
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ArtGurl
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| Tue 11/04/08 08:39 AM |
ohhh fear ..... nicely written!!!
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pkd1220
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| Tue 11/04/08 09:03 AM |
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QUOTE:
Thanks Robert, it takes one to know one
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AngelLight
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| Tue 11/04/08 09:06 AM |
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Such an important write g/f....Ty for your words of wisdom
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lurchs_sister
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| Tue 11/04/08 09:11 AM |
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How completely amazing this is Lady!!
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pkd1220
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kc0003
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| Tue 11/04/08 10:43 AM |
Sadly fear does play a roll. The truck is to see that it is only a supporting one.
Nice write
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