Fadedspirit
Joined Sun 12/23/07
Posts: 1506
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| Tue 11/04/08 04:39 AM |
Where Seperate Fades
In a place
Where candles lit
Darkness fades
From where we sit,
Just you and I
Alone right here
Heart to heart
Without a fear.
Speak to me
And voice your heart
Show me dear
What you impart,
Speak the wonders
Held inside
Voice your pain
That seeks to hide.
Share your soul
As passions rise
And bear your heart
With tears you've cried.
I give to you
What seems not much
And share with love
My heart as such.
I'll take from you
Those tears you've cried
And mend the soul
What's torn inside.
As candles melt
The flames are snuffed
Along with tears
The pain is crushed.
Just you and I
Within the dark
A flame begins
From nurtured spark
Passion seeks
From where it hides
Within our love
New life resides.
Fadedspirit 11/4/2008
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HockeyChick
Joined Thu 10/23/08
Posts: 353
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| Tue 11/04/08 05:00 AM |
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another good one
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flame1cutie
Joined Thu 04/24/08
Posts: 5224
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| Tue 11/04/08 05:38 AM |
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pkd1220
Joined Thu 05/24/07
Posts: 1819
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| Tue 11/04/08 05:48 AM |
such sensitivity is truly spoken here 
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Mystique42
Joined Thu 04/12/07
Posts: 3675
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| Tue 11/04/08 06:12 AM |
Aw, your heart speaks. A light from yonder window breaks! Love this one.
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LAMom
Joined Tue 12/12/06
Posts: 24116
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| Tue 11/04/08 07:00 AM |
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Ohhhhhhhhhhhhhh I love this,, Beautifully moving, heart warming
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d4tc
Joined Tue 04/15/08
Posts: 1525
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| Tue 11/04/08 07:11 AM |
 Good Stuff.
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kc0003
Joined Fri 05/11/07
Posts: 3456
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| Tue 11/04/08 10:23 AM |
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Well done faded one.
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Differentkindofwench
Joined Sat 04/07/07
Posts: 4425
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| Tue 11/04/08 12:41 PM |
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QUOTE:
Well done faded one.
He took the words right outta my mouth!
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Fadedspirit
Joined Sun 12/23/07
Posts: 1506
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| Tue 11/04/08 01:05 PM |
Thanks HockeyChick.
Thanks flame1cutie.
Awww, thanks pkd.
Thanks Mystique, I'm glad you liked it. 
Awww, thanks LAMom, Ya never know what surprises this spirit holds in store.
Thanks d4tc. 
Thanks kc, glad ya dropped by.
Lol DKW....Agreement is a good thing sometimes.
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