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Topic: One Dark Dream Dreamt
d4tc
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Joined Tue 04/15/08
Posts: 1525
Tue 11/04/08 07:42 AM



I just saw me
cut myself

Across the neck
waking up

In a cold sweat
dripping wet

Sweet dreams
gone sour

The pain
devouring

Closed eyes
knowing why

Innocence
sleeps

Whence evil
creeps

Nightmares
felt

Iced Tea
Unsweetened

The fear mongering enticed
Faint of heart weakens

There the evil joy impacts
attacks as it deepens
 
LAMom
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Joined Tue 12/12/06
Posts: 24116
Tue 11/04/08 07:46 AM
Within your writes there are moments where I have cried, laughed, smiled and felt the comfort of warmth,, Today My need to hold you is great,,


Another moment of stillness as your brush swipes the canvas,,,

heart flowerforyou
 
HockeyChick
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Joined Thu 10/23/08
Posts: 353
Tue 11/04/08 08:11 AM
very visual-well done
 
pkd1220
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Joined Thu 05/24/07
Posts: 1819
Tue 11/04/08 08:52 AM
Gripping write J. Checking under the bed and turning on the night light...heart smile
 
kc0003
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Joined Fri 05/11/07
Posts: 3456
Tue 11/04/08 11:14 AM
Nice piece
 
Differentkindofwench
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Joined Sat 04/07/07
Posts: 4425
Tue 11/04/08 12:33 PM
hmmm, perhaps the sweet dreams interrupted are not as live enhancing as one would think. Careful which chopping blocks you put that neck on.
 
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