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DeathsTreaty

Joined Wed 01/09/08
Posts: 11765

Tue 11/04/08 08:43 AM

Dead..

Your not going to live for much longer

Death holds you close

Do not leap from the comfort

Your End will come either way

With a will or not

The pains

The scars

The breating

The speaking

It will stop

Leap not from the comfort of Deaths arms

He welcomes you when it seems about your time..

ddn122

Joined Mon 11/05/07
Posts: 9138

Tue 11/04/08 08:44 AM

i will embrace it......at that time

pkd1220

Joined Thu 05/24/07
Posts: 1819

Tue 11/04/08 08:44 AM

I actually find this comforting, somehow flowerforyou

LAMom

Joined Tue 12/12/06
Posts: 24116

Tue 11/04/08 08:46 AM

QUOTE:

I actually find this comforting, somehow flowerforyou

As did I

DeathsTreaty

Joined Wed 01/09/08
Posts: 11765

Tue 11/04/08 08:51 AM

Death's Comfort may have been a better title then

lurchs_sister

Joined Mon 10/08/07
Posts: 6269

Tue 11/04/08 08:51 AM

(((DT))) This is amazing! flowerforyou

DeathsTreaty

Joined Wed 01/09/08
Posts: 11765

Tue 11/04/08 08:52 AM

Bonjour ^^

Thanx

It seems some find a comfort with this write...

Its kind of funny..I was kind of going for the other way...

lastmanstanding602

Joined Tue 12/11/07
Posts: 1529

Tue 11/04/08 08:53 AM

QUOTE:

This sounds more like life

DeathsTreaty

Joined Wed 01/09/08
Posts: 11765

Tue 11/04/08 08:55 AM

Like Life?

How so?

pkd1220

Joined Thu 05/24/07
Posts: 1819

Tue 11/04/08 08:57 AM

QUOTE:

Bonjour ^^

Thanx

It seems some find a comfort with this write...

Its kind of funny..I was kind of going for the other way...

I know you were, but those of us reading bring our own experiences of death that color how we interpret what you wrote. bigsmile

DeathsTreaty

Joined Wed 01/09/08
Posts: 11765

Tue 11/04/08 08:59 AM

Ive read it over

And Now I see where a sense of comfort can come from

Maybe my real intentions were not what I thought at all....

pkd1220

Joined Thu 05/24/07
Posts: 1819

Tue 11/04/08 09:01 AM

QUOTE:

Ive read it over

And Now I see where a sense of comfort can come from

Maybe my real intentions were not what I thought at all....

This often happens when writing- it does to me anyway... always processing

HockeyChick

Joined Thu 10/23/08
Posts: 353

Tue 11/04/08 09:03 AM

good one

DeathsTreaty

Joined Wed 01/09/08
Posts: 11765

Tue 11/04/08 09:06 AM

THis one seems to have goten much more attention then my other writes...

A lighter veiw?
or maybe just a simpler one?

flame1cutie

Joined Thu 04/24/08
Posts: 5224

Tue 11/04/08 09:13 AM

Very good write flowerforyou

pkd1220

Joined Thu 05/24/07
Posts: 1819

Tue 11/04/08 09:18 AM

QUOTE:

THis one seems to have goten much more attention then my other writes...

A lighter veiw?
or maybe just a simpler one?

people tend to comment on what they can relate to-we are all going to experience death. smile

I like all your writing- it may be the timing of when things are posted, you never know. I recently posted something with no comments, don't think too much into it. smile

DeathsTreaty

Joined Wed 01/09/08
Posts: 11765

Tue 11/04/08 09:22 AM

I cant help myself sometimes ^^"

I think to much on things...at least thats what Im told...

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