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DeathsTreaty
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Tue 11/04/08 08:43 AM
Dead..

Your not going to live for much longer

Death holds you close

Do not leap from the comfort

Your End will come either way

With a will or not

The pains

The scars

The breating

The speaking

It will stop

Leap not from the comfort of Deaths arms

He welcomes you when it seems about your time..
 
ddn122
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Tue 11/04/08 08:44 AM
i will embrace it......at that time
 
pkd1220
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Tue 11/04/08 08:44 AM
I actually find this comforting, somehowflowerforyou smile
 
LAMom
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Tue 11/04/08 08:46 AM
QUOTE:

I actually find this comforting, somehowflowerforyou smile


As did I flowerforyou
 
DeathsTreaty
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Tue 11/04/08 08:51 AM
Death's Comfort may have been a better title then
 
lurchs_sister
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Tue 11/04/08 08:51 AM
(((DT))) This is amazing!flowerforyou
 
DeathsTreaty
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Tue 11/04/08 08:52 AM
Bonjour ^^


Thanx


It seems some find a comfort with this write...


Its kind of funny..I was kind of going for the other way...
 
lastmanstanding602
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Tue 11/04/08 08:53 AM
QUOTE:

Dead..

Your not going to live for much longer

Death holds you close

Do not leap from the comfort

Your End will come either way

With a will or not

The pains

The scars

The breating

The speaking

It will stop

Leap not from the comfort of Deaths arms

He welcomes you when it seems about your time..

This sounds more like life
 
DeathsTreaty
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Tue 11/04/08 08:55 AM
Like Life?


How so?
 
pkd1220
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Tue 11/04/08 08:57 AM
QUOTE:

Bonjour ^^


Thanx


It seems some find a comfort with this write...


Its kind of funny..I was kind of going for the other way...


I know you were, but those of us reading bring our own experiences of death that color how we interpret what you wrote.bigsmile
 
DeathsTreaty
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Tue 11/04/08 08:59 AM
Ive read it over

And Now I see where a sense of comfort can come from

Maybe my real intentions were not what I thought at all....

 
pkd1220
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Tue 11/04/08 09:01 AM
QUOTE:

Ive read it over

And Now I see where a sense of comfort can come from

Maybe my real intentions were not what I thought at all....

This often happens when writing- it does to me anyway... always processing


 
HockeyChick
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Tue 11/04/08 09:03 AM
good one
 
DeathsTreaty
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Tue 11/04/08 09:06 AM
THis one seems to have goten much more attention then my other writes...


A lighter veiw?
or maybe just a simpler one?

 
flame1cutie
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Tue 11/04/08 09:13 AM
Very good writeflowerforyou
 
pkd1220
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Tue 11/04/08 09:18 AM
QUOTE:

THis one seems to have goten much more attention then my other writes...


A lighter veiw?
or maybe just a simpler one?




people tend to comment on what they can relate to-we are all going to experience death.smile

I like all your writing- it may be the timing of when things are posted, you never know. I recently posted something with no comments, don't think too much into it.smile flowerforyou
 
DeathsTreaty
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Tue 11/04/08 09:22 AM
I cant help myself sometimes ^^"


I think to much on things...at least thats what Im told...
 
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